interesting....turquoise is a cool color...and swans are beautifulllso nice imagery...makes me wonder if you had something deeper in it though i am not getting...
Nothing deeper Brian ... just visualized the scene and wrote :-)
Turquoise is one of my favorite colors :)
It really is a soothing color :-)
love the visualI'm always amazed that haiku can say so much with so littleand you do it well
That's the magic of haiku ... and I am just learning :-)
I need to get busy on this prompt.. I hope I can catch it before it ends... Turquoise and swans... Beautiful gem and a beautiful bird.. put them together and you've got a series of beautiful words... Thank you for sharing Amrit!
Thanks a lot Crystal :-)
wonderful imagination, put in exquisite words.
Thanks Meenakshi :-)
I loved it
Thank You Ali :-)
Lovely poem ~ ^_^
Thanks Carol :-)
Perfect! You are getting better everyday. :D
I hope so :-)
Turquoise is really a cool color ..and your words are refreshing ..nice
Thanks Odyzz :-)
Simply wonderful GS!! The words bring out the image in the minds eye...
Thank You Reshma :-)
Well expressed! I love turquoise.
Thanks Mary :-)