Saturday, December 08, 2012

A Ghost Love Story


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"Why can't you love me, Dearie?"

"Because you are not a human. You are a ghost."

"But what's that got to do with my emotions, Dearie?"

"Ok. Tell me. Do you have a heart to feel this love?"

"Oops. Err ... I guess I lost it somewhere while playing basket-heart with the other zombies yesterday."


This 55 words Micro-fiction is shared with Best 55 Fictionist Contest and the Prompt is Ghost.



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40 comments:

  1. Haha ! Woow, you gave a comic twist to the word ghost. So innovative, loved it. :) It was a hilarious one :)Awesome first try buddy :) :D

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    1. Thanks for encouraging me through this :-)

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  2. I was expecting it to be smthng else lyk somethng spooky....but u jus gave it a diff yet an extraordinary flavor....;)

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    1. Just tried to make it different :-)

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  3. Haha...spooky things can be humorous at the same time!! Good one :)

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  4. Basket-heart? Really??????? :D

    Hahaha! :P This is cute and I was imagining the lovely ghost in the picture speaking to his beloved, and that sounded funnier than ever. :D

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  5. Haha!..really funny! Enjoyed reading your ghost story :D
    I really get such kind of stories in my dreams :D

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  6. This gave me a smile! Fun.

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  7. Really I expect this kind of Innovation... :) really a good one... thanks for participating Green Speck... take care...!!!

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  8. ""Oops. Err ... I guess I lost it somewhere while playing basket-heart with the other zombies yesterday." Too cute, some people do that and their not even ghosts :-) Good stuff,,,

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  9. This is so funny ~ This made my night..he..he...

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  10. I enjoyed the humor. It was touching and sweet.

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  11. He is a lovely little ghost ... welcome in my house ... anytime :)

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  12. I thought it was going to be something like 'Jini aur juju' (in case you watch hindi programmes :P) but the twist was too good :) made your fiction quite a different :)

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    1. Ha ha ... naah, just tried to do it a bit differently :-)

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  13. Hi there, good to see you participating in the contest. This one's a nice blend of paranormal with humor. Good one!

    Wish you all the best with the contest...

    Btw, first time here. You have a nice blog, following it :)

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  14. I like stories told through dialogue. It's hard to get it right, but you do, Green Speck.
    Good luck to you.

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  15. a very sweet romantically haunted lovestory

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